Thank you so much for sharing your ad. It is good to hear your HC FB page has gotten good results. My suggestion would be to highlight the benefits of the area with in your first sentence. People dream of living in an area like yours and highlighting that right away would be good. Something like, have you ever dreamed of living the Colorado mountains with stunning views and unlimited outdoor activities? Additionally, you mention mid-level provider and that term has been replaced with just the word provider, so I would suggest that be changed. Also, make sure to post on the CHAMPS recruitment website too….or any other website you can think of on the Western slope too. Thank you for sharing. Ann
Hi Sarah –
Thank you so much for sharing your ad. It is good to hear your HC FB page has gotten good results. My suggestion would be to highlight the benefits of the area with in your first sentence. People dream of living in an area like yours and highlighting that right away would be good. Something like, have you ever dreamed of living the Colorado mountains with stunning views and unlimited outdoor activities? Additionally, you mention mid-level provider and that term has been replaced with just the word provider, so I would suggest that be changed. Also, make sure to post on the CHAMPS recruitment website too….or any other website you can think of on the Western slope too. Thank you for sharing. Ann